Gladys ponsonybys is an unsually short woman certainly not More than 5 foot or nine or ten maybe even less than that one of those tiny persons who gives me, when I am beside her the comical, rather wobbling feeling that I’m on a chair
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March 24, 2016 at 2:17 pm
I can see that you’re using some of Dahl’s style, especially when using noun phrases to develop the introduction of a character.
Two things:
Don’t forget basic punctuation
I’m interested as to how this will develop – introduce the setting. Why have you chosen 1st person instead of third?
March 24, 2016 at 4:44 pm
This ain’t my story go to genre badge
March 24, 2016 at 4:45 pm
Here I was just attempting to write in his style