To strong parachutes
Hi, my name is Javaun and I’m doing an experiment that WILL help your company make more money. I am already a qualified physics scientist as I have the electromagnetic badge . i’m intending to improve the control of your parachute. in order to improve the control of the parachute i have to perform an experiment, which i need funding for. You will benefit from this because you will be able to vary how fast or slow you would like your parachute to fall and change the speed while using it, when the mass of the parachute increases the time it takes to drop decreases. This will also make your company much more money than other parachute companies because of its new features. All i’m asking is for some funding in order to perform the experiment which will, in return, make your company some SERIOUS money.
Make the right decision.
DR.BANCE.
June 30, 2016 at 7:40 pm
Hello!
I’m so pleased this has made it to Edutronic. I completely agree that your Electromagnet Badge means you’re a qualified Physicist. I’m glad you include this.
All the persuasive elements of this piece are in tact and you clearly understand that scientists need to earn their keep.
Sadly, you haven’t unlocked hypothesis yet. In fact you haven’t included one!
What is your hypothesis?
Also- I owe you a badge on Edutronic Achievements. Which one have I missed out?
Cheers,
Ms C